Project 4: The Touching Story
Tonight, I killed my mother. I am so sorry for this.
It will certainly come as a surprise to her, but ’tis true.
I delivered the fourth speech in the Storytelling manual at Toastmasters. The speech was to elicit emotion from the audience. It was to be a “touching speech”. To that end, I crafted a realistic fiction story. I ensured my evaluator, who introduced me (as is the custom in this club), stated that this was indeed a fictional story. In my research over the past year, I have read that some Toastmasters have taken exception when a speaker purposely yanks at the heartstrings without disclosing the speech is fictional.
This speech is one I like. The recording does not reflect the tone in the room. About a third of the way through, I knew I had hooked the audience. As I practiced the speech, I knew I needed to drive home the close. I found that when I became choked up, I felt better about the end. I was able to get there live. I killed my mother for dramatic effect. Several Toastmasters mentioned that my quavering voice was effective.
Unfortunately, I really hooked a few in the audience. While that meant I met my speech objective, it was apparent the Toastmaster of the evening fell totally for it. I cut off the recording early in the after speech discussion, but you can tell she (and she was not alone) truly believed my mother died last week.
I felt pretty good about my delivery. I once again spoke more quickly than I practiced. It was decent, but not as good as rehearsal. Also, I do not like this recording. Perhaps the distance between the mic and me accounts for it, but the expression didn’t come through in the audio. Several members mentioned they thought I should deliver this for the International Speech contest next spring. Perhaps. The speech needs work, but rather than beat myself up over it, I’ll just let it stand for itself.
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